Fishies 0.8.2

field-guide/en-GB/aquarium/stash.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ The stash holds things you own but haven't put in the water yet:
 
 ## Placing from the stash
 
-Open the shop and choose its Stash page, or press 8, then pick something. Placing it is free, because it's already paid for. A gifted egg only starts its hatching clock once you place it.
+Open the shop and choose its Stash page, or press 8, then pick something. Placing it is free, because it's already paid for. A gifted egg only starts its hatching clock once you place it. Holding more than one of the same thing? The next one stays in your hand, so you can place them one after another.
 
 ## How much it holds
 

field-guide/en-GB/caring/feeding.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ _When a fish needs food, and what looking after it earns._
 
 Choose Feed and click the water to drop some food. Basic food is free and never runs out, so feeding never costs you a coin.
 
-A newly hatched fish needs its first meal. After that, a fish gets hungry again 4 hours after each feeding.
+A newly hatched fish needs its first meal. After that, a fish gets hungry again 4 hours after each feeding, or a third of its growth time after it if that is longer.
 
 Select a fish and choose Feed on its card or in its menu to drop food just for that fish: it swims to it, and no other fish takes it.
 

field-guide/en-GB/caring/notifications.md

@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ Turn reminders on and Fishies lets you know about the things that matter while y
 
 - Your fish need food.
 - A fish is close to starving, about 2 hours before it would be lost.
-- Eggs have hatched.
+- Eggs have hatched, or a fish is ill and needs a remedy.
 - The glass needs cleaning.
-- Your filter needs a service soon, your auto-feeder is running low or has run empty, or some fish are outside their comfortable temperature.
+- Your filter needs a service soon, your auto-feeder is running low or has run empty, or some fish are outside their comfortable temperature. You can also be told when a fish is lost, when someone visits your aquarium and when someone follows you.
 
 ## Where they arrive
 

field-guide/en-GB/caring/temperature.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ The gauge under your level and coins shows the temperature next to the [water qu
 
 Every species belongs to one of four groups:
 
-- Reef fish · 24 to 28 °C. Most of the catalogue, and every fish until the lagoon fish arrive.
+- Reef fish · 24 to 28 °C. Most of the catalogue, and nearly every fish until the lagoon fish arrive.
 - Lagoon fish · 27 to 31 °C, like the Parrotfish. Warm shallows and open tropical water.
 - Temperate fish · 17 to 22 °C, like the Knifejaw. Happy at room temperature, never in a heated reef.
 - Hardy fish · 20 to 28 °C: the estuary wanderers and the Bristlenose Pleco. At home almost anywhere.

field-guide/en-GB/economy/coins.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ Coins are the game's money. You earn them by looking after your aquarium:
 
 ## Spending coins
 
-Coins buy eggs, plants, decorations, [equipment](https://fishies.lol/wiki/equipment) and [more aquariums](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/aquariums) in the [shop](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/shop), and gifts for other keepers. They also pay for richer foods, remedies and filter cartridges. Flake food is free, and so are refilling a feeder, moving decorations and changing your aquarium floor.
+Coins buy eggs, plants, decorations, [equipment](https://fishies.lol/wiki/equipment) and [more aquariums](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/aquariums) in the [shop](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/shop), and gifts for other keepers. They also pay for richer foods, remedies and filter cartridges. Flake food is free, and so is refilling a feeder with it. Moving decorations is free, and so is switching between floors you already own.
 
 ## Guests don't earn coins
 

field-guide/en-GB/economy/economy.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ _What fish and decorations are worth, and when._
 
 ## Selling fish
 
-Only living adult fish can be sold. At level 1 a grown fish pays about 1.65 times what its egg cost, plus 4 times the experience you got for buying it. Every species' sale value is in the [species catalogue](https://fishies.lol/wiki/species), and a fish's card shows the exact amount before you sell.
+Only living adult fish can be sold. At level 1 a healthy, plain-quality grown fish pays about 1.65 times what its egg cost, plus 4 times the experience you got for buying it. Its quality, colour, age and how well it has been looked after move that price up or down. Every species' base sale value is in the [species catalogue](https://fishies.lol/wiki/species), and a fish's card shows the exact amount before you sell.
 
 A fish that was lost can still be collected with the Net, but it pays nothing.
 

field-guide/en-GB/economy/leveling.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ _How experience adds up and what each level brings._
 
 Experience (XP) comes from looking after your aquarium:
 
-- Buying fish and decorations.
+- Placing new fish, and placing each kind of decoration for the first time.
 - Feeding a hungry fish, for 5 XP.
 - Selling grown fish.
 - Cleaning dirty glass.
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Titles mark the big stages of your journey, from New Keeper at the start to Keep
 
 New species, decorations and [equipment](https://fishies.lol/wiki/equipment) unlock as you climb, and every ordinary species and decoration is yours to buy by level 99. Level 25 opens [more aquariums](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/aquariums). Along the way you also get more room for fish and decorations, and from level 11 a sale bonus that grows with every level.
 
-Each level-up opens one screen: your new level up top, then each unlock in turn, with extra room and the sale bonus shown alongside. A single Continue closes it, even after a jump of several levels. It waits until what you are doing is finished (a catch being sold, an egg being placed), and a jump of several levels shows the level you started from and the level you reached, with every unlock under its own level.
+Each level-up opens one screen: your new level up top, then each unlock in turn, with extra room and the sale bonus shown alongside. A single Keep going closes it, even after a jump of several levels. It waits until what you are doing is finished (a catch being sold, an egg being placed), and a jump of several levels shows the level you started from and the level you reached, with every unlock under its own level.
 
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field-guide/en-GB/economy/net.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ While a fish waits in the basket it's hidden from the aquarium, and it comes bac
 A lost fish is collected the same way, for no reward, which frees up its space. The Net leaves these alone:
 
 - Eggs, babies and juniors, because only adults can be sold.
-- [Legendary fish](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/legendary).
+- [Legendary fish](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/legendary), and any fish resting in the [Conditioning Box](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/quality).
 - A friend's fish that is [swimming in your aquarium](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/swim-visits) as a visitor.
 
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field-guide/en-GB/economy/quests.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Nothing asks you to buy anything, and nothing expires. There is no claim button:
 
 ## The rail and the quest window
 
-Every quest in progress is an icon down the left of your aquarium, ringed by how far along it is. Click one to open the quest window.
+Up to four quests in progress show as icons down the left of your aquarium, each ringed by how far along it is; the rest wait their turn. Click one to open the quest window.
 
 - The window shows the story so far, the quests in progress, and each quest's steps and reward.
 - A quest can be taken off the rail from its window and put back later; it keeps counting either way.

field-guide/en-GB/economy/shop.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ _Buying eggs, plants and decorations, one at a time or all together._
 
 The shop has pages for Fish, Plants and Decor, an Aquarium page, the Aquarium Studio, for [filters and feeders](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/filters-and-feeders) and [more aquariums](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/aquariums), and a Stash page for everything you own but haven't placed yet ([the stash](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/stash)). Everything on sale is listed in the order it unlocks, and you can search and sort each page. Things above your level stay visible and show the level they unlock at.
 
-Star a species to add it to your favourites, up to 24, so it's quick to find again.
+Tap the heart on a species to add it to your favourites, up to 24, so it's quick to find again.
 
 ## Buying and placing
 

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/reef-journal.md

@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@ It is the same guide as the one on the website at fishies.lol/wiki, written once
 Search finds an article, a fish or a decoration by name. Without a search, browse by category.
 
 - Articles: every part of the game, with each rule explained once. Links inside the book stay inside the book.
-- Fish: each species with its Latin name, its Stars and Care level, what sets it apart, and its growth and sale facts. See [Stars](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/stars) and [Care level](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/care-level).
-- Decorations: price, unlock level and category, with a note on caring for it.
+- Fish: each species with its Latin name, its Stars and Care level, what sets it apart, and its growth and sale facts. In the game, a fish fills in once you have met it; on the website every species is listed. See [Stars](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/stars) and [Care level](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/care-level).
+- Decorations: price, unlock level and category, with a note on caring for it. In the game, a decoration fills in once you have met it.
 
 ## On the website
 

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/signin.md

@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Until you save it, a guest aquarium lives only in that browser. Clearing the bro
 
 ## Saving your progress
 
-Open the account panel and choose Save your progress. Link a sign-in and every fish, coin and decoration stays yours, on any device. Coins start counting from the moment you link; earlier guest sales aren't paid back.
+Open the account panel and choose Save progress. Link a sign-in and every fish, coin and decoration stays yours, on any device. Coins start counting from the moment you link; earlier guest sales aren't paid back.
 
-Depending on where you play, you can sign in with Google, Discord, X, Apple or a phone number. There's no separate Fishies password to create or remember.
+Saving a guest aquarium offers Google, X and Apple, depending on where you play. Once it is saved, you can add Discord, a phone number and more from the Account app, and any of them signs you back in. There's no separate Fishies password to create or remember.
 
 ## One account, every device
 

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/time.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Every aquarium runs on the server's time, not on an open browser tab. Eggs hatch
 
 ## Coming back
 
-When you return after a while, a While you were away summary tells you what happened: eggs that hatched, fish that grew up, fish waiting for food, fish that were lost and whether the glass needs a clean.
+When you return after a while, a While you were away summary tells you what happened: eggs that hatched, fish that grew up, fish waiting for food, fish that fell ill, fish that were lost, whether the glass needs a clean, and anyone who visited or followed you.
 
 ## Before a long break
 

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/tools.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ _What each button in the dock does, and the Map in the corner._
 
 Almost everything you do in your aquarium starts from the dock of tools at the edge of the screen. Pick a tool, then click or tap the water, a fish or the floor.
 
-- Look: tap a fish to see what it needs, how old it is and what it's worth.
+- Look: what you hold when no other tool is picked (key 1). Tap a fish to see what it needs, how old it is and what it's worth.
 - Feed: drop food into the water and watch your fish chase it.
 - Net: tap a grown fish to sell it, or collect a fish that was lost.
 - Clean: scrub algae off the glass with the sponge.
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Out in Open Water the Map stands in the same corner: pick another place to swim
 
 ## The right-click menu
 
-Right-click (a long press on touch) with no tool picked opens a menu for what is under your finger. On a fish: open its card ([Your fish's card](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/fish-card)), feed it, sell it or collect it. On the water: feed here, drop an egg of a fish you starred (see [Shop & cart](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/shop)), clean the glass, decorate, sell every adult of a species, or browse the shop.
+Right-click (a long press on touch) with no tool picked opens a menu for what is under your finger. On a fish: open its card ([Your fish's card](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/fish-card)), feed it while it is growing, sell it (or every adult of its species), collect it, or add its species to your favourites. On a decoration: move it or sell it. On the water: feed here, drop an egg of a favourite fish (see [Shop & cart](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/shop)), clean the glass, or decorate.
 
 ## Keys
 

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/tutorial.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ A card beside the aquarium follows along and tells you what to do next. A step o
 
 ## When you're done
 
-The last card shows what your sale paid and suggests the cheapest fish you can afford next, with a button straight into the shop. From then on every fish follows the normal rules in this guide, starting with [Eggs & hatching](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/hatching).
+The last card shows what your sale paid and suggests another Clownfish as your next fish, with a button straight into the shop. From then on every fish follows the normal rules in this guide, starting with [Eggs & hatching](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/hatching).
 
 Already know your way around? A quiet Skip tutorial button sits on the card at every step. Skipping gives nothing extra, and your first fish stays exactly as it is. The shop stays open the whole time, too.
 

field-guide/en-GB/reference/languages.md

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ The game, its Reef Journal and its patch notes are available in:
 
 ## Changing your language
 
-Change your language from the language setting inside the game's account menu; it's saved to your account and used for care reminders too. Outside the game, each language has its own address (fishies.lol for English, fishies.lol/tr for Turkish, and so on for the others), and the site follows your browser's preferred language the first time you visit.
+Change your language in the Keeper OS, under Settings › Display; it's saved to your account and used for care reminders too. Outside the game, each language has its own address (fishies.lol for English, fishies.lol/tr for Turkish, and so on for the others), and the site follows your browser's preferred language the first time you visit.
 
 ## What is translated
 

field-guide/en-GB/social/chat.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Chat lives in the bottom-left of the screen, inside the aquarium. It's one windo
 
 - Reef: one room shared by every keeper.
 - Room: the aquarium you're looking at, yours or a friend's, or the Open Water place you're swimming in.
-- Whisper: a private conversation between two keepers who follow each other. In Settings › Account you can also let anyone from level 10 whisper to you.
+- Whisper: a private conversation between two keepers who follow each other. It opens at level 10. In Settings › Account you can also let any keeper of that level or above whisper to you, even if you don't follow each other.
 - A small blue dot before a keeper's name means they're out swimming in Open Water right now.
 - Tap any name, your own included, to open that keeper's card.
 - A Room message also rises as a speech bubble over the aquarium: above the speaker's fish if they have joined as one, otherwise at the front glass with their name.

field-guide/en-GB/social/explore.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ _Finding other keepers, and keeping up with the ones you like._
 
 ## Finding aquariums
 
-Everything worth a visit is on the Map. Pick the Coral Neighbourhood on the ocean map to see keepers' aquariums as homes, or open the Map's Friends page to go straight to someone you know.
+Everything worth a visit is on the Map. Pick the Coral Neighbourhood on the ocean map to see keepers' aquariums as homes, or open Friends in the Keeper OS to go straight to someone you know.
 
 ## The Coral Neighbourhood
 
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ Every home wears its keeper's name, a dot for whether they're home, out swimming
 
 ## Following
 
-Follow a keeper from their aquarium to keep them close: they show up on the Map's Friends page and among the homes in the Coral Neighbourhood. Their follower count shows on the aquarium's plaque.
+Follow a keeper from their aquarium to keep them close: they show up in Friends, in the Keeper OS, and among the homes in the Coral Neighbourhood. Their follower count shows on the aquarium's plaque.
 
-You can also follow straight from a home's card in the Coral Neighbourhood or from a keeper's row on the Map's Friends page. Point at Following and it turns into Unfollow, so taking it back is one press.
+You can also follow straight from a home's card in the Coral Neighbourhood or from a keeper's row in Friends. Point at Following and it turns into Unfollow, so taking it back is one press.
 
 ## Stars