Fishies 0.8.2

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/reef-journal.md

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 Search finds an article, a fish or a decoration by name. Without a search, browse by category.
 
 - Articles: every part of the game, with each rule explained once. Links inside the book stay inside the book.
-- Fish: each species with its Latin name, its Stars and Care level, what sets it apart, and its growth and sale facts. See [Stars](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/stars) and [Care level](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/care-level).
-- Decorations: price, unlock level and category, with a note on caring for it.
+- Fish: each species with its Latin name, its Stars and Care level, what sets it apart, and its growth and sale facts. In the game, a fish fills in once you have met it; on the website every species is listed. See [Stars](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/stars) and [Care level](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/care-level).
+- Decorations: price, unlock level and category, with a note on caring for it. In the game, a decoration fills in once you have met it.
 
 ## On the website
 

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/signin.md

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 ## Saving your progress
 
-Open the account panel and choose Save your progress. Link a sign-in and every fish, coin and decoration stays yours, on any device. Coins start counting from the moment you link; earlier guest sales aren't paid back.
+Open the account panel and choose Save progress. Link a sign-in and every fish, coin and decoration stays yours, on any device. Coins start counting from the moment you link; earlier guest sales aren't paid back.
 
-Depending on where you play, you can sign in with Google, Discord, X, Apple or a phone number. There's no separate Fishies password to create or remember.
+Saving a guest aquarium offers Google, X and Apple, depending on where you play. Once it is saved, you can add Discord, a phone number and more from the Account app, and any of them signs you back in. There's no separate Fishies password to create or remember.
 
 ## One account, every device
 

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/time.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Every aquarium runs on the server's time, not on an open browser tab. Eggs hatch
 
 ## Coming back
 
-When you return after a while, a While you were away summary tells you what happened: eggs that hatched, fish that grew up, fish waiting for food, fish that were lost and whether the glass needs a clean.
+When you return after a while, a While you were away summary tells you what happened: eggs that hatched, fish that grew up, fish waiting for food, fish that fell ill, fish that were lost, whether the glass needs a clean, and anyone who visited or followed you.
 
 ## Before a long break
 

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/tools.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ _What each button in the dock does, and the Map in the corner._
 
 Almost everything you do in your aquarium starts from the dock of tools at the edge of the screen. Pick a tool, then click or tap the water, a fish or the floor.
 
-- Look: tap a fish to see what it needs, how old it is and what it's worth.
+- Look: what you hold when no other tool is picked (key 1). Tap a fish to see what it needs, how old it is and what it's worth.
 - Feed: drop food into the water and watch your fish chase it.
 - Net: tap a grown fish to sell it, or collect a fish that was lost.
 - Clean: scrub algae off the glass with the sponge.
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Out in Open Water the Map stands in the same corner: pick another place to swim
 
 ## The right-click menu
 
-Right-click (a long press on touch) with no tool picked opens a menu for what is under your finger. On a fish: open its card ([Your fish's card](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/fish-card)), feed it, sell it or collect it. On the water: feed here, drop an egg of a fish you starred (see [Shop & cart](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/shop)), clean the glass, decorate, sell every adult of a species, or browse the shop.
+Right-click (a long press on touch) with no tool picked opens a menu for what is under your finger. On a fish: open its card ([Your fish's card](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/fish-card)), feed it while it is growing, sell it (or every adult of its species), collect it, or add its species to your favourites. On a decoration: move it or sell it. On the water: feed here, drop an egg of a favourite fish (see [Shop & cart](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/shop)), clean the glass, or decorate.
 
 ## Keys
 

field-guide/en-GB/getting-started/tutorial.md

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 ## When you're done
 
-The last card shows what your sale paid and suggests the cheapest fish you can afford next, with a button straight into the shop. From then on every fish follows the normal rules in this guide, starting with [Eggs & hatching](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/hatching).
+The last card shows what your sale paid and suggests another Clownfish as your next fish, with a button straight into the shop. From then on every fish follows the normal rules in this guide, starting with [Eggs & hatching](https://fishies.lol/wiki/mechanics/hatching).
 
 Already know your way around? A quiet Skip tutorial button sits on the card at every step. Skipping gives nothing extra, and your first fish stays exactly as it is. The shop stays open the whole time, too.